I suddenly stopped!

Here I present my Second Collaboration with Mcube (Mahesh Mali). He is a phenomenal poet and his poetic words always look so real 😉 😉 !! Do visit his amazing blog.

There you go…



I suddenly stopped
I love the wind,

and flew with it!

The flawless smile on my face,

Exuberant me through the phase.
Euphoric flight was always a delight

but something… took its sight!

Being heedless about the surroundings,

Vivaciousness turned into dispiriting.
The hit was strong,

and never let the wings go round!

I suddenly stopped…

Without any practical thought.
The feeling was completely unknown

but made me ruminate on and on…



I stopped.
Because even a breath in that space is enough to mesmerize me,

In that phase my heart starts bubbling over with inexpressible hope and joy.
I had not felt the extent of that in years ! It was so good,

I wanted to hold onto it.

I would go to this place of peace in my heart that felt so good, I couldn’t move.
I’ve tried to pause long enough that my heart would dig way down,

To capture every glimpse of this amazing feeling.

You can see our First Collaboration here 🙂



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  1. Such poem, such collaboration, much wow!

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  2. Very well written! I enjoyed reading your blog.. Keep up the great work..😄

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  3. Ishan Shrivastava December 16, 2016 — 9:30 am

    Poetry is very very good, I loved it, you are simply awesome..
    I also wrote some poetry, but I am not so good in writing…

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  4. I suddenly stopped TO READ IT AND I FEEL I REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!

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  5. beautiful poem/s… excellent work

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  6. Wonderful job both of you

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